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Sunday, February 22, 2009

Creative Writing One-Liner Prompts - 3rd grade

One-line prompts were followed to create stories:

"It is starting like this."

by Lars

It is starting like this. "I go to the mall, you don't-- that is how it goes," my Mom said to me. "No way," I said. She told me to go to my room and I said, "Ok, Mom." She said to stay in there until she got back. I said "Ok". I stayed in my room and that is how this story ends.

"I was made to rebel."

by Connor and Jenny

I was made to rebel. In my house whenever we eat we have to wash the dishes. I hate washing dishes! Whenever my room is a mess I have to clean it up. I hate that. I hate homework but I always have to do it...
I love to run, and we can't run in the classroom. I wish I could get on top of the monkey bars but we can't get on them. I hate that!
It's mean, because we want it our way.


"At home, I'd get up early."

by Christian and Josh

At home I'd get up early, when the sisters were still asleep and head to the ancient Chinese man's store and get a teacup and a Chinese clock. And a table, and then I leave.

"A child wants to see."

by Luis and Angel

A child wants to see the dog. The dog has big red feet, and looks like a lion. One day the dog left the neighborhood on those big feet.

It's all in a Name- 5th grade

Students use a name acronym to describe themselves:

Musical
Awesome
Respectful
Intelligent
Emotional
Love
Adorable

Marvelous
Awesome
Right all the time!
Great
Active
Radiant
I love trees
Talented
Actress

Awesome
Dread
Run
Important
Apple
Nectarine

Knight
Extra cool
Vince is one of my best friends
Is fun
New

5th Grade Earthweek Article follow-ups

Students responded to an article from Earthweek Diary, true news of the wierd on planet Earth.
They read an article and described what happened thereafter.

Article 1: Mosquitoes
Theme: Mosquitoes in Athens, Greece reported which have evolved to be uber-smart, indefatigable and pesky.

"Mosquitoes", by Kevin

Mosquitoes are not even funny. They make me mad! Another place they are found thriving is in the Sierra Mountains in California. They are most active from two hours before sunrise 'til sunrise. They sometimes sit on top of the water.
You never want to walk into a crowd of mosquitoes. Trust me, it really hurts! If you wear repellant, you will most likely not get poked.
Don't try to keep them as a pet! That's all for now, folks.

"Mosquitoes", by Patrick

If a mosquito bites your nose, it gets larger and larger. Clothes designers are upset because people who get bit on their rear end can't fit into their clothes and they lose sales. And, the people have stopped buying sweatshirts because when they sweat, mosquitoes bite them.

Article 2: Fish from Heaven
Theme: In a village called Manna in India, a live rainstorm of flying fish descend upon a village, providing food for many people. Due to to deep sea currents, this phenomenon has happened in the past but rarely is there a live storm.

"Fish From Heaven" by Margarita

"I can't believe the weather today," said the weather forecaster, Ms. Holland. "Ma'am, Ma'am, get on wth this forecast, we don't have much time," the producer yelled. Crash. Crash. Boom. The windows cracked and all the windows shattered as fish fell through them, and slipped down the hall. One even fell on the weather girl's head.

"Fish IN Heaven" by Allan

One day, a fish was at home in its' pond. The pond became polluted and it died. The fish went to heaven, and it met the fish god. Then it lived in a gold house.

Article 3: The Monster Rabbit
Theme: An enormous rabbit has been reported about in England which is about three feet tall and terrorizes people's gardens. A documented case of a giant rabbit exists in captivity and this may be a wild counterpart.

"Monster Rabbit" by Andrea, Uriel, and Mariela

The rabbit came back and guards tried to kill it. The guards failed, the rabbit won- and he went and destroyed the garden. Then the monster rabbit ate all the crops and he got fat. After he ate all the crops he went to a sumo wrestling match. In that match he played against a giant bear. Finally, the bear won and the monster rabbit just gave up. Then the British town gave the giant bear a big award. They never saw the Monster Rabbit again.

Friday, February 20, 2009

Six-Word Memoirs - 6th grade

Six-Word Memoirs activity excerpted/ inspired by the book:
Best American Non-Required Reading 2007, edited by Dave Eggers

These were hilarious!

Children were given examples:

"Wanted world, got world plus chocolate."
"Bad brakes discovered at high speed."
"Wasn't born a redhead; fixed that."
"Lucky in love, unlucky in metabolism."
"Never really finished anything except cake."
"I managed not to destroy anything."
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And came up with..
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"Money was thrown away, life had." - Tyler
"I don't remember my middle name." - Tyler
"When showering, sing rock and roll." - Tyler

"I had to go to Ohio." - Seth

"I love my mom so much!" - Ulises
"I am a good soccer player." - Ulises

"Haven't broken a bone so far..." - LaMaya
"MySpace, MySpace, MySpace, MySpace, MySpace, MySpace." - LaMaya

"My friend's whistle drives me crazy." - Jose

"Born in Chicago, got a dog." - Al

"My alter ego is a Queen." - unknown
"Accomplished my goals in Math, yeah!" - unknown

"Spending time with friends equals happiness." - Dani
"My alter ego is totally Mexican." - Dani

"Wanted chocolate, did not get chocolate." ;( Alejandra
"Wanted a sister, got annoying sister." - Alejandra
"Wanted a hot chocolate, got coffee." - Alejandra

"Found out that I am smart!" - David
"Sports make me fly, fly, fly..." - David

Haiku - 3rd grade

Hallowe'en

A Vampire I'll be
I'll wear black and sparkly red
I will get candy

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I sat down today
A fly was flying around
please don't land on me!

by Summer
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Handball

I will play handball
I hope I don't hit my friend
Ball bounces, hits wall

by Zennia
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Bunnies

Hopping, fluffy ears
I want a bunny, badly
I love them so much

by Cameron
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Hallowe'en

Scary spooky bats
and ghosts, black cats give bad luck
Hallowe'en is cool

by Kiana
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At recess I play
I like to play football now
because I'm older

by Phillip
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Recess

I did my homework!
at recess I play "Two-Touch"
at recess I play

by Alen
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At recess I play
I kick the soccer ball hard
Soccer is so fun

by Jessy
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At recess I sat
on the bench and did homework
no playing today

by Magali
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Recess ends early
I like to play with my friends
after school is fun

by Lizet
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At recess I play
When it ends I am so sad
I eat and play ball

by Nick

Haiku - 5th grade

Snack time

I need recess now
I'm so hungry, I could croak
I am very big

by Adrian
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About Me

I play with my friends
I have brown hair and I'm smart
I like to travel

by Ruby
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A rhino is big
A rhino has a big horn
they can't play soccer!

by Patrick
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Favorite Sport

Kevin likes to ride
I like BMX biking
Jumping is the best

by Kevin
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Recess

At recess I play
Vanesa and I are friends
we walk to the grass

by Mariela
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Recess

Dodging and throwing
I play dodgeball with my friends
happy, enjoying

by Lupita
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Friends

School is very fun
School has a lot of hard math
and awesome friends too

by Sophia
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I fell off a swing
we play hard at after-school
boys are weird, hate 'em.

by Margarita
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My Friends

My friends are awesome
my friends work together well
we play together

by Eduardo
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Dodgeball

Dodgeball is so cool
I got hurt with a dodgeball
it makes me sweaty

by Sofia
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Haiku - 6th grade

"They"

Arid skies, dark nights
They're coming to prey on us
hurry, run away

Big Dipper

Look at the nightsky
the Big Dipper shines so bright
-never dread the night

Friendship

A friendship is Love
It's like a relationship
there are ups and downs

Music

Music is awesome
it ties my life together
makes my days more fun

God

Day leaves, starry nights
When the wind moves, when sun shines
it is God above


by Lamaya
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Cookie Monster

Blue fat mountain man
Cookie monster is famous
on a kid's landscape

by Asia
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Music

Music is laughter
Music is the way of Life
music is joyful

by Emma

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Paintball

Bryant likes paintball
you get shot and color flies!
it hurts very bad

by Bryant
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Longing

Wish I was at home
playing Guitar Hero 3
I would be happy

by Miles
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Bikes on the playground

We like to ride bikes
Let us use them to have fun
and be sooo happy

Wheedling for bike use

Roses are golden
violets can be bright purple
we want to use bikes!

by David
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Soccer

We're good at soccer
we play flawed and have fun, but
Your team always wins

by Jose
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Soccer

We're good at soccer
We play in Spring, it's better
All we do is win.

by Ulises